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    Want input on composition. Did I include too much of the flower? I didn't want to cut off any of the left hand side.
    Nikon D4, 1/640@ F4.0, ISO 1600, 500mm, 1 EV, hand held out of car window.

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    I think the composition is perfect.

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    Roy,

    I'd play around a bit with the composition, but overall I think it looks pretty darn good. There's a bit of room on top that could go, and a bit on the left as well to balance things out.

    The pose and head angle are wonderful, and i might try to make the catchlight just a tad brighter.

    Miguel

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    Miguel gave more emphasis to the bird, but I might go just a tiny bit looser on the sides. Even though the flower is bigger then the bird, I'd hate to cut it in two.

    Gorgeous flower and tonalities -- well done, and especially so for out a car window!

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    Thanks for the comments guys and gal.

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