
Originally Posted by
Gabriela Plesea
Hello Dvir,
Opened this thumbnail and read the title again. I smiled and thought to myself "Dvir is no stranger to Shakespeare". Very effective, the title really works and it drew me in, I like the perspective and the vehicle in the distance adds this element of danger to the whole story. In March this year we drove past a tiny tortoise in the Kalahari and I was tempted to "help" it cross the road but decided against it since the rules of the park stipulate that one must not leave the vehicle while not in the camp. About an hour later we drove back on the same road following some spoor (animal tracks) and was surprised to find the remains of the tortoise in the middle of the road, a speeding vehicle must have driven over it.
I wanted to suggest at first that you try to crop from the top to eliminate the man-made element, but on second thought I applaud you for leaving it in: you are sending a powerful message out there and telling a story - thank you for this post, I truly enjoyed viewing and appreciate your intention, well done!
Kind regards,