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    Lovely image Jonathan. The bird looks real good. I Would either remove or tone down the grey rock in the FG, as I think it takes away some of the elegance of the image

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    Looks pretty good to me Jonathan. I think William makes a good point re the rock in the bottom right corner, it keeps pulling at my eye. Otherwise beautiful work. Regards, Ian

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    Ooh I like this a lot. I love the spread open foot on the rock, and the two other sleeping individuals add to the scene. I agree about that FG rock, toning it down would be good.

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    Thanks for the feedback, I always await eagerly, I agree about the rock in fact it is already toned down quite a bit - when I did more it became a bit muddy. Perhaps I will try a little cloning/patching.

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