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As always a very dramatic sky! I like the glow that Paul added to the sails. It warms up the entire image and makes the sail boat appear more natural with the lighting. I would not have thought of it and will try to remember the technique. OOTB is the greatest place to exchange techniques since we all stray from the straight and narrow!
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I agree with Paul's comments. In compositing, it's very important to get everything about the lighting/shadows consistent and to consider it's effects. I'd also suggest lopping off a good bit of the sky -- enough to put the divine proportions or rule-of-thirds line through the bright upper part of the sky that runs from edge to edge. That would give a stronger composition while leaving a good bit of the dark clouds.
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I am always looking for suggestions. Thanks. I did paint the sails with a thin layer of the warm sky color, but perhaps not enough. The original Sail pic was from an overcast day, so was quite blue. I used to do quite a lot of sailing photos (25 or so years ago) so when I haven't been able to get out and take some new photos, I will dip into the old slide file... The sunrise cloud pic was a few days ago.
I have posted a new version, and made some of the suggested changes along with a bit of topaz Impression.
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It's a wonderful image, but I have to vote for Paul's version and Dennis' crop.
I love your reflections, but whenever I have a reflection running out of the frame I try to leave enough of it that I can soften or darken it at the edge, so it isn't pulling my eye out of the frame.
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