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    as below: difficult see a border between art and nothing good. When I see lines, geometric forms I'attracted by them.
    In self critic: I should prefer not to see the herbs i LR
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    Hi Valerio
    I think I can see what you have in mind with this shot. However the second one is just not right some how. The first one you posted was sharp the second and I presume its the same picture, is not. Something has gone wrong somewhere.Anyway I still like the idea and the problem is that with macro or close up whatever you call it, the pics need to be sharp. Especially on this site as they will be looked at very closely- believe me !
    I still loke the idea.
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    john, Hi ,thank you. You're right. It depends on what gas happened: I was used to work in Nikon C., the Notebook was stolen,the softare was inside, now I begin to learn Photoshop CC. But I'll buy a book that Iprefer than seeing articles. It was only important what you and other members think about.

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    Good idea there is a nice image in there. I think there is a little too much going on however, to have impact the image subject generally needs to be obvious.

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    Thank you Jonathan. I SUPPOSE you mean it's better not to have too elements in a image, I agree. The herbs in LR are distracting, but it was impossible to avoid them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Valerio Tarone View Post
    Thank you Jonathan. I SUPPOSE you mean it's better not to have too elements in a image, I agree. The herbs in LR are distracting, but it was impossible to avoid them.
    Yes, that's exactly what I meant, I am not the best at this type of image but I think simplicity is key.

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    The suggestions/comments above are good guides for you. My first thought was that the whites are a bit blown and distracting. I like the basic idea of what you saw. I tend to think that way myself. What's important is the execution and that you can work on.

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