Results 1 to 10 of 10

Thread: Theme - Bosque white on white

  1. #1
    BPN Member Cheryl Slechta's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Micanopy, Florida
    Posts
    8,383
    Threads
    841
    Thank You Posts

    Default Theme - Bosque white on white

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    From my trip to Bosque del Apache last year and the magical snow fall. Straight out of the camera, levels adjustment.
    "It is only with the heart that one can see rightly" - The Little Prince

    http://tuscawillaphotographycherylslechta.zenfolio.com/

  2. #2
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    8,458
    Threads
    682
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Very beautiful Cheryl. I love the mountains in the bg and all the frenetic activity. I might try a slight gradient from the top to tame the brightest tones. I am curious about what the line in the image is???

  3. #3
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    southeast Michigan
    Posts
    2,846
    Threads
    208
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    My first inclination was to suggest cropping a bit from the top, but -- because the contrast between the calm sky and the take-off of the flock is very effective -- I like it better with the amount of sky you chose. It must've been wonderful to be there in person and have the sounds superimposed on what we see, here. The slight upward angle from left to right of the clouds and some of the background color fits very nicely with the take-off.

  4. Thanks Cheryl Slechta thanked for this post
  5. #4
    BPN Member Cheryl Slechta's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Location
    Micanopy, Florida
    Posts
    8,383
    Threads
    841
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thanks, Jackie. I'm not sure which line you mean.


    Quote Originally Posted by Jackie Schuknecht View Post
    Very beautiful Cheryl. I love the mountains in the bg and all the frenetic activity. I might try a slight gradient from the top to tame the brightest tones. I am curious about what the line in the image is???
    "It is only with the heart that one can see rightly" - The Little Prince

    http://tuscawillaphotographycherylslechta.zenfolio.com/

  6. #5
    BPN Member Kerry Perkins's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2008
    Location
    Simi Valley, California
    Posts
    8,310
    Threads
    1,048
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    That's really pretty Cheryl! I wasn't able to go last year and I missed this. Perfect for the theme too. I think the line that Jackie is seeing is the railroad tracks that are on the western boundary of the refuge.
    "It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera... they are made with the eye, heart, and head." - Henri Cartier Bresson

    Please visit me on the web at http://kerryperkinsphotography.com


  7. #6
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Toronto, Canada
    Posts
    8,458
    Threads
    682
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Yes, that's it!

  8. #7
    Lifetime Member Michael Gerald-Yamasaki's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Santa Cruz, CA USA
    Posts
    2,035
    Threads
    311
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Cheryl,

    Wow. That's beautiful, Cheryl. I particularly like the top to bottom contrast in color and texture. Good show!

    I wondered if a slight flat tunnel gradient (from middle a gradient dark to white both up and down, covering, say, the middle 50%). Here overlay blend at 24%

    Name:  Theme---Bosque-white-on-white_Edit.jpg
Views: 42
Size:  376.9 KB

    just an idea that could use a little more work. The OP is grand.

    Cheers,

    -Michael-

  9. Thanks Cheryl Slechta thanked for this post
  10. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Santa Rosa, CA
    Posts
    9,587
    Threads
    401
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Great seeing and capturing! I like Michael's touch -- subtle but very nice.

    I would try leveling the tracks -- they need a slight CW rotation. Even if they are on a grade or at an angle, there isn't information in the picture to convey it.

  11. Thanks Cheryl Slechta thanked for this post
  12. #9
    BPN Member Paul Lagasi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Bells Corners, Ontario, Canada
    Posts
    5,316
    Threads
    642
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice work Cheryl, but its way too early for snow....it took me a sec to see the birds , very nicely done. I also vote for cloning out the tracks...

  13. Thanks Cheryl Slechta thanked for this post
  14. #10
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Russellville, Arkansas
    Posts
    5,189
    Threads
    674
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Unbelievable numbers of snow geese!! I like all the pale layers of geese on the ground, geese in flight and then the mountains, & sky. However I do like the subtle difference in Michael's posting. I would consider cloning out the tracks.

  15. Thanks Cheryl Slechta thanked for this post

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics