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This is an amazing image, Artie! In one frame, you have documented the survival of the fittest. The positive of the rambunctious chick trumps the negative of the emaciated remains of the other.
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Sad, but beautifully documented. I wonder about taking a little more off the top -- my eye goes to the tail feathers more than I like.
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Thanks Marina and Diane, No negatives or sadness for me. It is what it is. As Marina says, "survival of the fittest. Diane, I have already cropped from above and below. Any more off the top would spoil the balance for me. I also got a bit greedy with the initial capture and had to add a bit of canvas left and right.... Zooming out a bit would have been a lot easier.
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Once again, Artie, a photo that clearly tells a story. When I see images like that I agree that "A picture is worth a thousand words". I value this kind of work a lot.
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What I find is an important detail here is the point of the adult's bill peeking into the image and actually pointing towards the dead chick's corpse, with healthy baby looking up at it. It makes for a great triangular story-telling "loop"
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The story told here is what is important and is what I like about the image.Top marks for showing the natural history
The IQ is good (of course)but...
I am not liking this composition. It seems very unbalanced to my eye. I find it very tight right and left and the cut off adult trumps the dead chick at the left.
I think that you are completely correct in your assessment that you should have zoomed out to include more or all of the adult.
Were you able to get one of the 2 chicks without the parent?
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gail bisson
The story told here is what is important and is what I like about the image.Top marks for showing the natural history
The IQ is good (of course)but...
I am not liking this composition. It seems very unbalanced to my eye. I find it very tight right and left and the cut off adult trumps the dead chick at the left.
I think that you are completely correct in your assessment that you should have zoomed out to include more or all of the adult.
Were you able to get one of the 2 chicks without the parent?
No to the last question. As for wider, I was thinking just a bit wider here. I did create some that included the whole adult--in those you the dead chick becomes a speck.... I do like the balance between a good view of both chicks while still giving them a bit of room. In the original frame there is a bit of triangular background above the adult's tail and that was NG.... Thus my chosen crop :)
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Nature is nature, yes it is sad to see that they both canīt live but it is what is is.
I like the vivid eye contact and the contrats of hard stones and soft feathers. If mine, I would give a tad more room on our right.
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Excellent shot and story, Artie! Perfect exposure and IQ. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks Binu and JC. JC, I already stretched the right side a bit and did not want to over-do it. I should have zoomed just a bit wider :) Too greedy.
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