Iceland5 central highlands

[Valerio Tarone]

60mm f20 1/100 iso200 EV-0,3 WB automatic aperture priority polarizer filter+GND filter
comments appreciated

[Don Railton]

Sorry Valerio, but this one is not working for me.. It looks seriously tilted down at the left, although from the FG I could be convinced otherwise... The light is subdued a bit too much and killing the detail and while you have included the cloud and sky there is not a lot of detail there either to make it worthy of inclusion I feel. You also have a number of significant dust spots that are distracting...

best regards

DON

[Valerio Tarone]

Don thank you, I see the problems.

[Hazel Grant]

Maybe a pano crop would help?

[Miguel Palaviccini]

Hi Valerio,

I think this is missing a good foreground element. You've got a nice mid and background, but nothing to really draw us in. The colors are a bit subdued, which is OK, but it doesn't lend itself well to catching the eye with this scene.

The horizon tilt is obvious, and it looks like the sensor needs a bit of cleaning as well.

[Andrew McLachlan]

Hi Valerio, ditto on the comments above...a tighter pano might have worked better for you here as there is little interest in the foreground or the sky. There is potential here, hopefully you are able to revisit this location again in better light...I return to my favorite locations time and again waiting for something a little extra special.

[Valerio Tarone]

Thank you Andrew, unlucckily there's no hope I revisit the location..

[Morkel Erasmus]

Valerio, I can only echo the critique offered above.
Perhaps the fine detail is there in the RAW file and can be teased out?

[Valerio Tarone]

Morkel,I'm sorry I'm out of home to do new images ,without my HD. I'll see within 3 days.