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    Reversed cloud image with Flood. Topaz remask, adjust & simplify.

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    Interesting effect you created with the cloud! Although the cloud looks fine centered in the image, the sail boat with that bulging sail might look better sailing into the cloud formation or maybe a sail boat without a full sail in the center position. Also those whites on the boat are a bit bright and distracts from the rest of the image.

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    Mitch, I like what you're doing here but I think I'd rather have a little less clear space around the boat.
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    The circle of clouds reallly didn't work with the boat, so I tried a different version...

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    Hi, Mitch, I like this one much!! better.
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    Both are too contrived for me. The boat in the first one is cool.
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    Thanks Nancy, Cheryl, and Arthur. All comments are always welcome.

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    I think in the first the lighting on the boat is too bright for the clouds (or the clouds are too dark and low contrast). I like the bird version much better but I'm not wild about the purples.

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