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Randll, I like the combination of filters that you used and I love what must have been bokeh in the background. I'd be tempted to crop just a little off the bottom to just below your sig and would probably clean up a few of the wispy lines around the beak. Lovely image
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Looks like he's on a mission. Nice processing. I would burn a gradient from the bottom rather than crop. The dark stuff above the bird needs some balance.
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Thanks Cheryl and Diane, I gave both idea's a go-couldn't get a gradient effect that I liked but the crop idea works as does cleaning the lumpiness around the beak.
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You are really demonstrating the utility of DAP. I had a trial version a while back, but couldn't achieve what I wanted out of it. You sure are...
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I like the colors and the effects here. I'd wish that the bird were not angling away from us and that the wings were in the full downstroke position.
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Thanks Artie, agreed, bird position not optimal. The 2nd to next frame shows an angle toward the camera, bill open and blown whites on the tops of the wing. Apparently the sun started to burn through as the sequence was being shot.
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YAW Randall. Been there done that on the sun peeking out.
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I like what you're doing with DAP, and I'm glad you decided to keep the shot. Given that the gradient Diane suggested didn't work for you, here's a different suggestion for achieving more balance. Do a Select>Color Range to choose some of the darker tones at the top, and -- with it still selected -- apply a Curves layer with it lightened. (When I tried it, the legs and dark parts of the eye were selected, too, but I just painted them out of the mask.)
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