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Classic MP scene 'from other images I have seen, as I have never been there myself' I would go a little tighter with the comp and take some off on the left and try reduce the brightness on the BG. Nice detail in the subject. I don't know much about monochrome images but feel this one could do with more contrast.
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Hi Shreyas - Good to see you posting again and I'm looking forward to seeing more images from both your trips. It's always nice to see a wild dog out in the open and it's a nice pose. Marc and Dumay have pretty well summed up my thoughts as well. I would definitely take some off the left, lose the dark spots at the top and give the dog a bit more punch. Btw you can post 900px high.
TFS,
Rachel
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Hi all,
Thanks for the input. The dodging/burning does bring it up a notch so thanks for the suggestion, Morkel!
@ Marc, SLNP is high up the list and the images from the park makes it even more enticing. You don't know how bad you want to get to Mana though 
Cheers
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Hi Shreyas, I like the conversion, nice tonal range with excellent detail. The crop for me doesn't quite grab me, would prefer more of a vertical, portrait format with the subject being slightly larger in frame, just my take.
Hope to see more.
TFS
Steve
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Hi Shreyas
I absolutely love this one. A great portrait and really shows of those long legs. For me I like the bright background that makes the subject stand out. I like more the first more central composition. Maybe Steve is right, that a vertical will be good.
TFS / Gregor
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So good to see you posting again, Shreyas! I absolutely love this, what a great sighting and your B/W certainly works for me! Morkel's RP sorted out the crop and added a bit more "punch", well done and I am very excited to see more from your trip!!!
Kind regards,