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  1. 05-21-2008, 08:59 PM #1
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    I shot this at the AF last year. Decided for the crop to accentuate the doo....
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  2. 05-21-2008, 09:03 PM #2
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    Like the Doo but i wish there was more room to the right and the eye and lores could use some selective sharpening.

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    Paul,
    I agree with Robert about more room on the right. I would also remove the bright spots in the background.

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    Agree with both, and would add that I find the bill gets lost within the dark BG. Cosmo would be proud...giddy up! ;-)
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    Nice doo and sharp but the dirty chin and the harsh light/hig contrast detract greatly, as do the white spots in the BKGR. Llastly, the bill is too close to the frame edge for me.
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  6. 05-22-2008, 05:28 PM #6
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    Really cool! agree about the room.
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  7. 05-22-2008, 07:39 PM #7
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    Thanks everyone, appreciate the feedback. Good points.
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