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Hi, Artie, I love this! I love the sense of movement of the skimmers and the soft bands of colors of the sand, water and grasses. I think you could take a sliver off the bottom and eliminate most of the darkest patch of grass on the left corner but it's lovely the way it is.
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I like the subtle colors of the layers in the background and the furious flapping of the blurred wings. Very nice!
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This is wonderful! I'd crop from the bottom to just let the top row of grass end but eliminate most of the white.
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Love the soft bands of color which contrast nicely with the chaos of the skimmers.
Last edited by Arthur Morris; 08-11-2014 at 05:16 AM.
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Thanks all. I disagree with the suggestions to crop a bit from below and the left. Why? For me, the darker areas lower left help--along with the shape of the flock in flight-- to create a right-pointing triangular look that gives the image energy.
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