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Really nice texture work and love the expression on the Pap. The colours are gorgeous. I might tone down the brights on the forelegs just a touch. Wonderful work.
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I love the little guy's expression and the look that you achieved. I wouldn't mind seeing one with a bit of detail in the face revealed from the original image.
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Hi, Kerry, good suggestions and I like the repost much better. Paps are cute (and vivacious!).
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Hey Kerry, All improvements are superb!
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The RP is great! I'd like to see a version with the saturation in the top part of the BG brought down a little, or maybe with a little tweaking of the yellow hue.
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I like the repost with greater face detail. I agree with Diane's suggestion of toning down the yellows.
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Late to the party, but I agree with all re: the repost- your works in the painter style are strong. I also agree with Diane's suggestion re: the yellows.