Nice shot. I might crop it down a bit--those two sticks in the background kinda grab the eye. I'm guessing you didn't get that shot on THIS weekend in So Cal. Some weather, huh?
There are few thing you can improve next time. A lower angle or eye view will give you a more powerful image. You may also want to get your subject bigger in the frame. With that said, I like the hair on this image.
Hi Brain. Nice capture of this pair of terns but as mentioned a lower angle is more desirable and I agree about the cropping from the top. Would love to see this larger so as to get a better view of the birds. Many thanks for sharing.