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Beautiful bird with great sharpness. Nice to see one on the ground, and you found a pleasing setting. There is a lot of magenta in the BG which is interesting but doesn't feel realistic. If you try to change the color balance globally you will affect other colors, which look good to me, although I don't know the bird. I would try some Selective Color or Hue-sat work on magentas and maybe blues, which shouldn't affect the bird that much.
The two bright OF areas UL are distracting, as it the small branch UR. Easy fixes.
You could do more work on cloning out the grass blades -- just come in from both sides with some spotting, rather than long strokes, to break up the pattern,
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Looks like you were laying in the dirt on this one. Nice and sharp. Good feather detail. I like shots like this that show the bird in its environment.
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I felt that too much magentas remained in my RP so I've removed it some more in LR.
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I think this is much better -- good job! Learning to see colors is a process. And the huge range of monitors and browsers out there can come up with many "interpretations" of colors and tonalities, but I'd say yours is good, from the RP.
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I hadn't seen the magenta either, Tobie. I'm glad Diane pointed it out. Just another example of why it's good to review the work of others. Plus I get to see such a beautiful bird captured so well. Thanks for posting it, Tobie.