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Ok so I am one of those where the cups half full on this image, maybe just a hint more detail might help. But Cheryl, you created it because you liked the effect and that's what matters most, that you like it.
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Very nice as an abstract Cheryl, with a lovely palette. I am torn, but think I would have liked to have seen one bird more in focus to relate to the rest of the group.
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The blur part is fine but the heaviness at the top bothers me. (But then I bother easily...) 
I wonder how it would look with a graduated adjustment layer coming down from the top with a big dose of a curve pulled up?
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Thanks, Paul, Jackie and Diane.
I'll give your suggestion a try, Diane. To me, I like the fact that there is basically no form to the birds - like a dimly remembered dream. And I like the colors.
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Cheryl, this makes me think. I see clearly your idea of a dimly remembered dream, but it probably would not have occurred to me without your prompting. The very top feels heavy and possibly a crop just down to that horizontal white line would be a possibility. And I would love to see more of those blues. But enough of what I want
. I do like the swirling feel of energy and the sense that it is directional to the right.
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Well, I like it! Maybe blurs are growing on me.
I think of it purely as an abstract, hence, no need for more definition. I love the limited color palette. Nice sense of movement. I think this is the perfect theme for you!
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Hi, Anita, thanks! I agree about it being more abstract than blur