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Story Sequences Moderator and Wildlife Moderator
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Hi Gabriela,
What struck me immediately is that the galloping zebras are much more important than their surrounding environment.
If it were my photo, I'd crop it tightly as possible to convey the drama of beautiful animals romping.
Leaving room in the crop, of course, for the dust, and a bit of space on the left to give them room to 'run.'
- Bill
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Hi Gabriela - I know this is a departure from your normal style of shooting tighter so good for you on experimenting. I understand Bill's point because the dirt field isn't the most beautiful of surroundings but on the other hand there are no really distracting bg elements intruding into the image. Because of the merger of the other zebras, the foal is the one that stands out and I wish it wasn't angled slightly away. The kicked up dust and action of the second zebra makes the image for me. It's nicely processed too.
TFS,
Rachel
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Hi Gabriela, I like the idea of shooting wider, i.e. to get the environment/habitat in, but also if time and perhaps more importantly the subjects allow you to, get closer too. Then you have the best of both worlds to choose from and it avoids hefty cropping. On this occasion I agree with the above about going tighter, perhaps a straight pano may help and avoid the stump on the LHS. Don't be too quick in content removal unless the birds etc are really annoying, sometimes leaving them in can make the difference to the image and, for the good. Techs look right and I like the fact the zebra have mud up their legs, like socks, likewise the plumes of dust created by the playing and interaction. I think the subjects can take some more selective sharpening, at 1/2000 you have almost frozen the action.
TFS
Steve
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Thank you Bill, Rachel and Steve,
This is a 20% crop - I was very tempted to go closer and the idea of a pano appealed to me tremendously. The reasons why I did not crop further are the following: I wasn't sure whether the IQ could handle it, and I really wanted to give you something different.
Rachel is absolutely right - this is a quite a big step for me, I love animal portraits and I like getting really close to my subjects, but the Kruger Park forced me to experiment. The zebra were at some distance, on the other side of a large pan. We were parked across the water and I used mainly the 500 lens, yet the whole time I had the feeling I was not close enough and often thought of using the 1.4 converter.
In terms of content removal Steve, the little bird I cloned out was in fact an oxpecker and just a distracting speckle, there was also a tiny dark branch that seemed to go right into the foal's muzzle, and a tiny impala with its back toward the water, not to mention a zebra bum on the right of the image. I am more than happy to show you the original and quite certain you would agree with my decisions
. I am a bit like Artie when it comes to clean images, but I think that- unlike me -he shoots them clean...On the odd occasion I do perform a bit of "surgery" to remove the most distracting bits.
More zebra images in the pipeline and for some of those I plan a heavy crop, just hope you won't get bored with my posts but I am sure you will tell me if that is the case
Thank you again for viewing and for your kind comments, so welcome and appreciated!
Warmest regards,
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Thanks for the additional info Gabriela, no need for the original and look forward to more stripes appearing over the coming weeks.
Thanks for all your input and effervescent replies, have a great week.
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I like the wide perspective and the look of some different habitat for them. Only wish for a little more separation between the individuals but realize how difficult that is with herd animals.
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Thank you dear Steve, I entirely agree with your comments. But there's more to come! I have so many images to process, some with zebra kicking and biting and more...Kind of picked this one randomly...Will try post something different in-between, to make sure you don't get bored with too many stripes...
Have a great week, warmest regards,
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My favorite zebra is the 2nd one as it is really romping. 2nd favorite is the first one. Least favorite is the last one that is partially shaded with the light somewhat from the left. Count me in the much-tighter to a pano camp. Working wide is a great plan when the habit is lovely. The bushes only detract as do the several branches lying about. SH with a good EXP.
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I find it very difficult to shoot zebras, not sure if it is the stripes (meant to confuse photographers) or just the way they interact. I agree on cropping tighter, but am also aware with a D3s you have more limited res than with newer bodies so maybe 40% or the original, from top right as we see it here. Sharpening for me is fine, do not overdo it.
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The zebras pop nicely against that dirt surroundings. I like the feeling of them seemingly turning around as they move. I actually really like the habitat above, but not so much the log debris. From such a distance did you notice lots of heat shimmer coming in between you and your subjects? Sounds like a fun place to photograph!
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Thank you Arthur, Neil and Daniel - some heat shimmer present indeed and when I tried to crop this into a pano it all became more obvious. This place is a beauty, and I did not mind the debris - it has been there since last year's great flood (which flattened many old trees and the damage is hard to imagine unless you see it with your own eyes). This pan not yet discovered by many visitors, kind of far away from the camp and we had it all to ourselves for many hours, enough to take over 1000 images of zebra, wildebeest, hippo and tsessebe.
Kind regards,
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Nice action here Gabriela - count me in on the tighter pano crop, though you might need to rotate a bit as you would lose the clear "horizon" formed by the riverbed in the BG?
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Thank you Morkel, and I agree entirely with your suggestion - once I do the pano I will need to rotate. Let me work on another image and do the pano crop, I think I found something a little more exciting in the same folder
Once again I thank you all for your input and critique - much appreciated!
Have a great evening,