Lovely incoming pose, and I like the translucence in the wings and tail feathers. I'm OK with the vegetation at bottom, just wish it was not touching the toe. Good composition. I'd remove the bugs that you left - they do not add much to the image and it's difficult to tell they are bugs.
BTW, a big welcome to BPN!!! As a member you should take advantage of uploading your images on our servers, this way a thumbnail will be generated for better visibility
Lovely light!! (And, yes, welcome!) Not easy to catch a bird just as it launches toward you. I wonder if a little more sharpening would give it a bit more punch?
I must have done something to degrade the IQ during reduction for the web as all of the other images are tack sharp. I corresponded briefly with Daniel about this issue yesterday, but have yet to figure out what I did wrong.