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    Beautiful - love it, this is my kind of image, I just love the pin sharp butterfly and the seed head along with the soft seed heads in the background. I also like the crop, I would possibly consider placing the butterfly just a tad lower in the frame. I much prefer the background and exposure in this image to your previous post. I would remove the small curly bit bottom left corner.
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    f:8
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    Morteza, Love the elegant image design especially the BKGR pods. That thing in the lower left corner needs to be evicted.

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    I haven't taken time to post comments for a while -- been very busy -- but I have to say this is just simply gorgeous! Don't know if you cropped, but I wonder if you have a little more image top and bottom (and even also on the sides, if you want a certain aspect ratio)? It feels just a little crowded there, and the elegance would be enhanced with just a little more space, for me.

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    Hi Morteza. This is a stunning image! Love the splash of subtle color in the razor sharp butterfly set against the overall brownish tones of the rest of the image. The OOF seed pods fading away into the background add a lot of interest to the image. Excellent work!

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