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    This was a shot I took a few months ago that was unusable to do a gross head angle, I estimate he was looking away from me at about 8 degrees, I realigned his head in photo shop,
    This is my first time trying this, and can't recall ever reading a tread about anyone else doing it. Is this pushing too far for the Avian forum?. Possibly belonging in the out of the box. Please direct me to a tread if has been covered before.
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    Nice exposure and sharpness Robert, and lovely high breeding plumage.
    Comp wise, I'd crop substantially from the bottom, a bit from the left and add to the right and top.
    I don't recall HA corrected in PP ever mentioned, but it sounds like you've found good method to achieving it. I couldn't tell. Maybe you can turn it some more as it's still off by a bit :)

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    Well, I am not sure I could do such a good job!
    If I wouldnīt read what you did I would have probably not detect it! Love the light and exposure in this one. Head angle is still not the best but I understand you wishing to fix it as this image has lots of potencial!

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    Hi Robert, I like the pose and soft light. Hint of habitat is nice too. The head still looks turned away from us a bit (as evident by the pupil) I'm not sure if you can fix HA by rotating/distorting the head. best is to capture it right in the field. I would also sharpen him a bit more.

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    Not sure how you could realign the head but pretty cool that you did!
    I think the image needs to be rotated CW and I would crop a bit off LHS and give him more room in the front if you have it.
    I wish the head didn't intersect with the far wing, I find the primary wing tips a bit distracting as they peek over the beak.
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    Feather details are very nice. I think the grass on the bottom is a little distracting so I would have cropped a little from the bottom. Background is also very well captured.

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    Great pose and overall image.

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    Thanks for the comments everyone, The head angle is still poor but I think improved, It may have bought me a few Degrees. There was really no way too push any more without distortion. Like Arash said. Better to get it right in the Camera.
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