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    Mac Wheeler McDougal Jr.'s Avatar
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    I think this is a beautiful bird and I like this pose. It is passing through this area on it's way to it's summer breeding ground. Shooting data as follows:
    Nikon D800
    600mm
    600mm (in 35mm film)
    1/1250 sec, f/6.3
    Mode: Manual
    Metering: Multi-segment
    ISO: 800
    AF mode: AF-C
    White balance: SUNNY
    Flash: Off
    File size: 42.7MB
    Image size: 7424 x 4924
    Color space: Adobe RGB
    Saturation: Normal
    Sharpness: Normal
    Contrast: Normal

    Comments more than welcome.

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    Nice pose and perch. I would have positioned it higher up and more left in the frame.

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    I love this species. Nice perch, fresh leaves and good background. I agree with Karl about composition, and had the sparrow turned its head a bit more towards us the eye would have likely been better lit.

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    Daniel and Karl,
    Thanks for your help in improving the presentation of this image. I could do little with the image was posted, but I went back to the original shots and found one that is very close to the original except that the head was turned slightly and it did indeed lighten the eye as you suggested Daniel. Karl - I was able to move this image up and to the left and I think is an improvement. The repost is below. Thanks again for the help.

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    The second image looks better for sure.

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    Indeed it does.

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