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    Jay:

    Nice to see you posting. Nice pose, lovely bird, remarkable bg.

    I might crop it more it more as a vertical, coming in from the right side, and consider toning down the luminosity of the perch a bit.

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    Thanks Randy!
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    Nice looking bird, excellent pose. Toning down the perch would help.

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    Great capture! Really nice pose! I also agree to tone down the perch a bit. There's a bit of noise or artifacts in the background.

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    He's a cheeky little chap!, Jay...and with a superb crest too. Agree re a vertical crop and toning down the perch.

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    I used to have one of these as a pet, not any longer though as I prefer them outside :-) Nice exposure, details, love the raised crest. Good suggestions you got. There are also a few repeating patterns in the BG that you can tweak a bit more.

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    I like the pose and BG, IQ is not great however, the feathers look over-sharpened and noisy with very little detail especially in the blacks. overall saturation and contrast are lacking too. more room to the left would be better

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    Thank you everyone for all of your comments and critiques; truly appreciated! Here is my "attempt" to apply all of the suggestions including Daniel's Rorschach Test.
    Last edited by Jay Gould; 05-06-2014 at 02:08 AM.
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