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    Art Museum - Piatra Neamt, Romania
    Nikon D300S
    Tokina 11-16mm @ 11mm
    f14, 1/125, iso-200
    Last edited by Gabi Sandu; 04-10-2014 at 02:21 PM.

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    Beautiful light, well captured Gabi.

    There's too much of the FG tile to my taste, which I'd cut about in half. Rather than crop, I'd like to have moved closer, but even a crop looks better to my eye. The square to the front view actually works reasonably well, but the outer walls seem to be tilting about one-degree outward, so I'd try to get those perfectly parallel.

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    Thanks for the comment and tips.

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    Hi Gabi
    I agree with David that a little off the foreground would help. Check your levels as well as the vertical edges of the building. I have a feeling the level is out, but it maybe just the distortion tricking me. Increasing the contrast in the sky will add more moody feeling, but I quite like it as it is.

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    Thanks for your comment Don.:)

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    Hi Gabi, I actually like the tiles and the way they lead you up to the door of the museum. I wish that the museum was centered in the composition and that the sun was hidden behind one of the clouds...if you waited a few minutes would the sun have been behind the clouds? Looking forward to more of your posts!

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    Andrew, thanks for your comment.:)
    I'll try to remake the photo considering all tips received.

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