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    Canon 5D Mkiii
    Canon F/2.8 300mm with 1x4 TCiii
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    First upload with the new camera. Thanks for looking

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    Let me be the first to congratulate you on your new camera. The image quality of this post is great and I look forward to many more. I love the colors and the way that the bird is perched on the slippery looking rock. I think that the composition could be strengthened with less on the left and more on the right. Perhaps a bit more sharpening on the head? (I lost my reading glasses, so don't rely on this comment!)

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    Nice Fulmar shot(without spit !!)
    I think I would agree with Grace re- positioning in the frame.
    Cheers
    JohnR

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    Thanks guys, I couldn't move the frame, that is a steep wall to the right, and I couldnt get into a better position or I would have fell 20 feet into the harbour

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    Great looking bird, and the rocks look very good too. I love the wet look to those rocks. Since you could not get anymore space at right I think just cropping some off the left would be a good alternative here (to about in between your first and last names).

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daniel Cadieux View Post
    Great looking bird, and the rocks look very good too. I love the wet look to those rocks. Since you could not get anymore space at right I think just cropping some off the left would be a good alternative here (to about in between your first and last names).
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    The IQ is really good and I know you will love your new gear.
    My only wish is for a bit more room for the tail on the bottom.
    I like the diffuse light and the exposure of the whites and details in the whites are spot on.
    Looking forward to more,
    Gail

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    Re-crop looks better, William, thanks for reposting.

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