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Hi Rachel... Another WOW...! This is a wonderful image. The black bg is perfect for the skin tones, and the downcast look compliment those dark tones nicely. Well done! I really hope the gorilla is a lot happier than he/she looks however. Mind you kids can do that to you..
Regards
Don
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Hi Rachel,
cool pose of the Gorilla , even if the slightly visible tongue make this species sometimes looking a bit stupid , for me.We have a female in our Zoo who has almost all the time the tongue sticking out and the lower lip is hanging downwards
, and that looks really stupid, to me.
Regarding the image you have some nice detail and spot colors , i do not mind about the eyes.I am not a fan of pitch black BKG , but your take. I would back off on sharpening because the light fine hairs are looking to prominent in the image , in this case i would take and inverted mask and sharpen only the darker parts .
Good job Rachel, TFS Andreas
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Hi Rachel, lovely image, I like it in color very much. You did very well with the light in this one.
I shall go in the zoo to over here.
No smily now, they do not work!
Have a great Sunday
Ciao
Anette
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Dear Rachel,
You already know how I feel about this image, but I will try to sum it all up in one paragraph: I like the subject's pose, kind of distracted and almost lost in thought. To me the tongue is the focal point, this little pink piece of flesh gives away the mood of the subject, just like the eyes would in normal circumstances, but here it all happens in a more subtle manner - the tongue gives life and meaning to the whole image. This is no ordinary photograph and, like I said to you earlier, I am so glad you did not try to extract detail from the eyes and allowed instead for the tongue to speak for your subject. Very evocative and I do like the space, I also like the darkness which to me is symbolic of the incarceration. This moves me Rachel, brilliant work!
Warmest regards,
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Thanks everyone for the kind comments. Andreas - I never mind a rp. Interestingly I had applied hardly any sharpening, just applying the Perrold sharpening action at 30%.
Thanks again,
Rachel
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Rachel,
I like the image. Even though it is a black ground with dark subject I guess bit of back lighting helped in making it interesting. Very much liked the shadows on the face.
Very well done.
-Sid
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Hi Rachel, like Marc's having the solid, dense black really makes the image as it's quite a powerful statement . Personally if you have it, then less black at the base of the back RHS and just open slightly the eye brow/lis just for a hint more definition. I like the subtlety of colour as it works well with he overall palette. The expression is priceless and perhaps poignant? I wonder if a little less on the LHS might help?
Worth the trip out.
TFS
Steve
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Thanks Sid and Steve, very much appreciated
. Steve - I'll look at your suggestions.
Thanks again,
Rachel
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hi Rachel, no problemo i personally do not like his action because he uses just the menu "sharpen " and not USM for his action.
Could you upload or send me the unsharpened and down sampled file ?
i would like to have a look juts for the interest, because it still feel it looks to sharp , just in the HL
Cheers Andreas
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Rachel, it works well as a poignant statement as you and others have pointed out. I won't do a RP too
, but agree the OP looks a bit crunchy. The sharpening action works well, sometimes worth it to apply a selection mask and further apply to selected areas as needed, perhaps even at lower opacity.
I do wish the near arm and shoulder were in focus - normally not bugged by it but with the stark outline against the uniform dark BG it just draws my eye more than it usually would...I know light was at a premium here...
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Thanks Andre and Morkel. Morkel - I do paint the sharpening at various levels of opacity. I actually masked the shoulder at 100% wanting to leave that oof and draw attention to the face. I can revisit it.
Thanks again,
Rachel
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This is a great image! The black BG and mostly black and white features really work well
The pink tongue and brown hair on the top of the head then make you realise it is actually a colour photograph
TFS
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Thanks Shane, much appreciated.