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I love the sky here and the look of fog in the rocky area. I like the balance of the composition. I'm not a big fan of long-exposure water shots, but I really like the way the water worked out in this one.
I don't really have any suggestions. Sorry.
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Hi Andres
I like your sky colours, your composition (using the gap in the rock as a lead), and the overall feel of the image. I'm a bit neutral about the fog, mainly because I don't see it anywhere else and would prefer a little more water amongst the rock to 'explain' the presence of the fog (which has a blueish cast)... that's all nit picky stuff I know but... My main suggestion for you is that the colour gradient on the water from foreground to horizon is getting darker closer to the horizon and I feel that is the most 'unnatural' part in your blend IMHO.
regards
DON
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Lovely mood here Andres. I agree with Don above, the first thing that struck me is that the midground seems unbalanced in terms of overall exposure.
Easy to fix, I would say, and that would take the image up a notch for me.
Really strong flowing composition IMHO...
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Thank you all for your comments and suggestions. I see what you mean regarding the midground darkness, but wasn't sure how to brighten it in a soft and smooth manner without affecting the sky colors. I'll continue playing with this one and see if I can come up with a solution. Thanks again!
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This a great composition Andres. I love the flow of water and colors in the sky. Good suggestions already given to make it shine. For such scenes I will use my 3-stop reverse grad filter...works beautifully. Very nice work!
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