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    I captured this image of a Wood Stork family at Merritt Island NWR, Merritt Island, Florida in 2012. I keep going back to it as my knowledge and post processing skills improve. I recently started from the beginning again with this result. The image is about 75% of full frame. I cleaned up the top of reflections of Mangroves that were distracting. Your thoughts and critique would be appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Love the symetry of this and I don't normally go for reflections but broken up like this I can live with !!
    Nice monochrome maybe ?? Wall hanger I reckon
    Great shot whatever
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    I like it. Very nice exposure. Fine job.

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    Love the hunting pose (I assume). Nice work with all the whites.

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    Awesome composition and capture Joseph!

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    This is very different. Techs look good.
    I like the 3 subjects and the way they are placed within the group.
    I just wish they were all heading towards the viewer instead of away from us.
    I feel like it needs some CW rotation.
    Do you have the full reflection of the middle stork? I would include it if you have it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gail bisson View Post
    This is very different. Techs look good.
    I like the 3 subjects and the way they are placed within the group.
    I just wish they were all heading towards the viewer instead of away from us.
    I feel like it needs some CW rotation.
    Do you have the full reflection of the middle stork? I would include it if you have it.
    Gail
    I believe Gail was trying to say CCW rotation.

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    Agree on the rotation -- CCW clearly meant! I'm torn between wanting more reflection or less. Might go for slightly lower contrast with more detail int he darks.

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    Thank you all for viewing, commenting and offering suggestions to improve the image. I have worked on the image using your suggestions as a guide. I expanded the crop to include the full reflection. I added canvas to the sides so that I could crop to a 16x9. Here is the re-edited image.
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    Much more pleasing to me! It is a little surprising how much less dominating the reflection of the larger bird is this way. Still feels like a little more rotation is needed.

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