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Interesting- even though it's the same branch, these are entirely different images. What draws me to this one is the bg. I love that transition from gray to blue. The vertical works nicely too though I do prefer the subject position in the prior frame. Wondering if a gradient could be masked into the prior image?
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I prefer this shot over the other. I like the position of the bird and how sharp it is. The vertical comp works well here and the colors in the background are very nice.
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I like this a lot! As you said, I like the first more for composition but the bird seems sharper in this one and the BG, as mentioned, is a plus.
You might consider adding a little canvas on top and right. The darks feel too heavy to me. In the previous one, it was only on the branch, but here it's also in the head.
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Comp is awesome! The only issue I have is that the bird's head is intersecting vertically with his leg (so it kinda looks like there is a leg "growing" out of his bill. BG is killer and love the flare and transparency of the tail.
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Yes, better. When you get LR5 you'll see a big difference in what you can bring out in Shadows and Highlights.
There shouldn't be a difference between the tonalities in PS and here, except to the extent that any differences in BG brightness are causing an illusion.
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