Hi Dan, excellent wing position captured for the this wing flap, and a great low angle too. I always like flying droplets, and if anything, Im finding the face a touch dark. Easy fix if you agree. I would also move her back to the left a touch.
Spectacular pose. Beautiful colors, great details, lovely water droplets, nice low angle and I like the composition.
Agree with Christophereye. Would lighten it bit more. Love the frame.