Hi Harold !!! Do like it but I think you need a different pose? Body and head looks great... wings are not doing much!! Would try feeding to make them hover or try them when they are landing. I think having the wings more parallel so you can see more of them makes it a big deal. The image is technically fine .... just need the bird to cooperate with poses for you !!!!
Great capture my friend. I personally like it the way it is, but then again you need to follow the experts.
Going to butterfly world this Sat. Are you up to it?