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Nice detail, EXP, and SH. But the crop leaves me wanting more. Or less. Probably less, as in a nice pano of the eyes.... A small bee indeed.
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Hi Gabriela - Welcome back! You and Andre were missed. Great first image with excellent sharpness and detail, including that tiny bee. Beautiful light. I agree about turning it more into a pano. I like Artie's last rp but might come in a bit from the lhs to get rid of the tuft of hair in the ulc. Looking forward to seeing more from your trip.
TFS and participating in this month's theme,
Rachel
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A common theme for tonight: I very much like the triangular tuft of fur in the ulc. Again, for me, it balances the negative space on the right very nicely :)
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Thank you Arthur-I like your crop best, adds emphasis to the eyes and that tiny bit of tuft in the upper left corner helps frame the face - much appreciated!
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Very informative learning experience to read and view the thoughts on cropping this image. I do lean towards Artie's post. Having light on the brow of the darker side of the face brings a good balance to this view of the head.
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Hi Gabriela ,
welcome back after your trip, hope you had a good one.
Nice one to start with, excellent detail, colors and some nice tonal depth in the image.I vote for Artie`s crop , too. More emphasis on the eyes,i think.
The left eye is just great………...
TFS Andreas
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Hi Gabriela, for Artie's crop fits the bill well.
My only additional thoughts would be:
- bring a bit more life in the eyes, dropping a bit of shadow in there also seems to pull out some more detail
- to remove the fly on the bridge of the nose, it's irritating me and I am sure the lioness. 
TFS
Steve
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Thank you Nancy, Andreas and Morkel,
Morkel, I cannot say our last Kalahari trip was very rewarding in terms of photography, we had numerous amazing sightings but often in such poor lighting conditions that we had to drop the cameras and resign ourselves to observing what was going on. One such occasion was at Mata Mata one late evening, when a male lion chased a subadult (offspring of the female lioness he was pursuing) over the camp fence.
I always take a videocamera along, when I am not taking photographs I love recording all sorts of things and making a little movie to share with family and friends. And I am glad you liked this image, bee and fly and all. This is a close-up of the female/partner of our dearest Fred, a lion we have first met in 2009 at Mata Mata. We were so happy to see the two of them were still together! Fred is about 16 years of age and fading, bottom teeth are gone, he has arthritis, is full of scars and his body fat is very low, yet there were two more youngsters with him and his lioness when we saw them in February…I must say this was the highlight of the trip and I noticed Andre was working on an image of Fred last night, hope he will share it with you soon.
Hope you all enjoy the week-end, heavy rain predicted here and maybe some more PP work...
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Gabriela I heard about the lions coming into the camp - that must've been something! I'd love to hear the full story.
I believe Fred is the same guy we labelled as "Badmouth" because of his broken jaw. Saw him a couple of times in the Mata Mata area since 2009, but I thought that Fred (from Ousus fame) lived in the Nossob river? Off-topic, sorry...
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Hello again Morkel, great to hear from you again, we thought and spoke of you while in the Kalahari and really wished you were there that evening
You would have enjoyed the MataMata "episode" and we would have concluded the evening with a well-deserved glass of wine, I am sure! We spend little time on the South African side when in the KTP but I always make sure Andre includes Mata Mata on the booking list, because we have had some amazing sightings there ( do you remember Eleanor the cheetah, and her cubs? And the Spotted hyaena den with the little cub?). Anyway, I guess I'd be going way off topic if I were to tell you the whole Mata Mata lion story, but we'd love to sit down with you one week-end and chat, let us know when you can take some time off, you are welcome to join us here in Hluhluwe whenever you find the time!
Warmest regards,