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    What you think about ?
    Is it fine or better b/n or no is it interesting ?
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    Took me a while to get it !'
    I ,like it but reckon it could loose some off the left and maybe the top too. Others will seei t differently no doubt abou tthis one !
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    Hi Giovanni

    I like (no,I love..) the idea you are trying to execute here, but I feel the bird is just a little too buried in the white... I am viewing on an uncalibrated monitor but I can determine all the bars in the luminance scale bottom of screen, but I cannot see all the outline of the bird and IMHO that's important...Just a touch more definition to the bird and this could be a winner for me...

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    The idea is given with this bird and it is a good one. However, a little more definition would be nicer. Also, I find that the in focus branch right to the bird is overpowering the image.

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    Trim from the left and top and work on the whites (I think you have detail hiding in them) and then i think you have something special here. Kind of like a little puzzle.

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    Hello
    off course I have details but I would like show all white except some point

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    This is a brain teaser, and I love it. Agree on cropping some from the left to tighten it up a bit. See what you get working on the whites a little but either way this is a fine image.
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    Hello Marina
    thanks
    Now ir it better ?
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    The RP is a big improvement on an already original and fresh image!!!
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