Nicely done head portrait.
consider doing a little noise reduction in the background.
Also, it could use a round of Nik tonal contrast.
I also smudged over the two bright circles (clone stamp.40%)- one to right of chest, and the other above the back.
No additional sharpening applied
here's an after photo: (and looks like it was saved at 1200 pixels wide instead of the original post at 900....
at 900 wide (added after original post): (Terry - post your pictures bigger than 900 wide:
Last edited by Don Nelson; 01-30-2014 at 11:34 PM.
The soft light gave you a nice display of the subtle colors, often lost in brighter light. I like the repeating curves of the forehead and breast, back of head.
Don's work is a nice improvement.
I might suggest that hand holding this camera/lens combo at such a slow shutter speed makes it difficult to get the maximum performance out of it. It is quite intolerant of movement, and think that using a higher ISO to allow faster shutter speed will yield a higher keeper rate.
I love the crop too, and I also like how round this fella looks. Nice colours and a nice smooth BG to make this guy pop. Not sure if use flash or not, but I feel that a bit of fill-flash would have done wonders here.