Hi Ashleigh and Gerry - I think you processed this very well. There's enough color coming through from the eye despite the shadow. Nice job on the exposure, sharpness and detail. The comp works for me as well. The only thing that I would do if it were mine is drop the blacks and the yellows in the whites in selective color. Keep them coming.
This is a beautiful image of an animal I would love to see in the wild. I agree that a bit more head-turn would be nice, but I would be very happy with this.
Ashley, this is a very good shot with excellent detail and sharpness. Simple design and clean BG. It is amazing that you could be that close and he just turned back to look at you. Your techs are good and f9 was a good choice to give you good DOF. I'd try to brighten the eyes a tad. TFS. Loi