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    I had an idea for this image while sitting home one sunday in the fall. The clouds were nice in the sky and I remembered seeing this nice looking leaf on a tree next to my house. I grabbed a leaf and went to the closest pond and placed it on the water. I used a polarizer filter to saturate the colors in the reflection but it also allowed me to see through the water (bottom Left) which I felt grounded the image. I cloned out some particles floating on the water in PS . Hope you like it.

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    Very Artistic, I would buy this, we Canadians are partial to the maple leaf...the transition between the blue and gray, with the leaf is perfect, just enough of each.....thanks for sharing

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    With the gray and white and the blue and red, this is a great mix of colors, and the reflection of the clouds and sky is wonderful. The leaf doesn't seem to be in contact with anything else in the image, and I think that works well in keeping the viewer's attention.

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    Nicely done, the leaf is lovely.

    I actually like the bottom 2/3 of the image and don't like the top 1/3.... the sky is too "blobby" if that makes sense, for my taste.

    I like the moody-ness of the bottom areas, through the water.

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    David, this is a great image for the theme. It's nice that you had a preconceived idea and followed through on it so well.
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    The leaf looks like it is floating on the sky, or is suspended against the sky. It looks more suspended than floating because it hardly makes a dent in the water. I like the cloudy sky transitioning from dark to light. Perfect for the theme.

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    It's a very nice idea,and a gorgeous leaf, but I think it would be more powerful if there was a little more indication that the leaf is on a water surface -- it could be mistaken for a cutout. Maybe some debris, or the effects of surface tension being more prominent.

    Also, the view through the water is not very apparent to me -- would be nice to see a hint more detail under the water, and more contrast in the lower portion.

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    Thank you for your posts and ideas. I will have to keep them in mind and try applying some of them this fall.

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    I like the sharp/soft contrast and the colour contrast, and that leaf does look like it is floating in water. Love the maple leaf too, we are Canadian. eh!

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