
Originally Posted by
Steve Kaluski
Hi Loi, compositionally i feel this is the best to date. There is a nice amount of space all round, the subjects for me are at the right angle to you and the layer colours of the background typify the location.
Techs look good and you had the right balance of kit to hand. I just took you OP back into LR, dropped the Red & Yellow -50, Darks -5, Shadow -20 just to add some more contrast, all personal taste, so perhaps this may help? Obviously you refine it further with the RAW and you may wish to adjust other parts. Nice to retain some depth & tone within the tusks. I also feel you can add some more sharpening too.
TFS
Steve