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    Default Banking Cory's Shearwater

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    Another one from the Cory's Shearwater series

    This one banked slightly above the water line so could not get the sea in the background

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    ISO 500

    I am not completely sure of the ISO but pretty sure it was that

    Cropped vertically for composition and the usual PP and sharpening. Not a lot done to this one actually

    Thanks for viewing

    Shane

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    I like the banking pose, underside details, sharpness and composition. Well done Shane.

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    Killer pose, exposure and comp (although I could see the bird moved into the frame just a bit more). Love it!

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    Super lighting/exposure great pose, a really fine shot.
    I would suggest the bird is slightly large in the frame (as is Shaneshac)

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    Thanks

    I was worried it would be small as I wanted to show as many details on the body as possible. The extended wings and the 900pixels max height make the body and head quite small in the frame

    I forgot to make the font smaller to compensate for the vertically cropped frame

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    I really liked this image as soon as I clicked on the thumbnail but my eye went straight to your signature. I would go smaller and lighter with your name. The font type is way too heavy ( for my taste !)
    The light on the bird and details are excellent and I like the good look at the bill.
    I would add a bit more canvas on the left.
    The BG has some purplish wavy linear areas in the top third of the image. I am not sure what this is.? posterization.
    Nice image,
    Gail

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    Hi Shane Not easy to crop with a position like this- not muh coice really. maybe would go a tad to the left but no big deal. Those wings eh ?!
    Great stuff.
    John

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    Thanks guys. Had not noticed those purple lines on the BG. Not a clue what caused it. Agree with the signature too and will address that.

    Am being quite succesful on these seabird outings due to being cloee to the water and getting a lot closer to the subject than i can on land. Will focus more on them i think

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    I like this banking pose and the bird is nicely sharp. I agree with others that crop is a bit tight. Interested in those purplish waves, are they in the .nef file or did this only show up in the small .jpg?

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    Excellent banking pose you have captured.
    Love the wing position,HA, details,colors and BG.

    Regards,
    Satish.

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    Thanks guys

    Need to check the raw file when I am back home after the 18th

    Will let you know when i review this

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