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    Desert Wheatear (Oenanthe deserti)

    Canon 5D III + Canon 400/5.6 + 2xTC
    1/640s; f11; iso640

    Welcome every comments and critique!

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    I really like the color palette and IQ. Great Bg and perch.
    It took me a second or two to figure out exactly what the bird was doing.
    I really wish the eye was visible.
    I think the composition should allow for less room on the LHS and more room on the RHS,
    Gail

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    Thanks for your comment, This bird preen below his wing. But if you look better, you can see his eye.
    Regrds,
    Zoltan

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    Yep, the eye is there now that you mention it. Perhaps adding a small catchlight would help with that...if you are OK with that type of modification. Nice perch and BG.

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    The color combination is great here. The eye is difficult to detect but I am not sure adding a catch light would work no matter how strategically you placed it. I'd be interested to see if anyone could add one and make it look real.
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