Deadacurate colours on this Jon. One of my favourite birds when the light is right.
I wonder about the branch on the left. Maybe a teeny bit dominant but also maybe a bit awkward to reduce. Just my opinion. Any more canvas onthe right ?
Cheers
JR
The rework of this image is a significant improvement to focus attention on the bird. I would suggest a pano crop best suited for this work with half the distance from the eye to the top of the frame removed in the first rework. A little more canvas on the bottom of the image would be helpful as well. I would not take anything from the right with the orange tree as placed. A slight more canvas on the left too much to ask for? Was a very slight darkening of white undertail feathers considered? Gorgeous image.
Removing the yellow twig on the left was a good idea. But it is to many empty space on the right.
I would try to remove the twig in the OP as you have done in the repost.