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Hi Cheryl - I like the infrared treatment here and the shapes. I prefer this one to your first post because I think there is a bit more form and separation of the shapes from each other. Only thing I keep wondering is if it needs a little ccw rotation but it may be the type of building where the lines aren't really straight.
TFS,
Rachel
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Hi, Rachel, thanks for your comments. I don't think there's a straight line in the building and it's sitting on a hill.
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I like the softer minimalist abstract here, maybe a touch more contrast for me, but nice and subtle.
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Hi Cheryl, I like this one best...so far...very nice work
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Thanks, Andrew
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Hi Cheryl
I really like the composition ,you have the makings a lovely black and white print. The conversion I feel is just too flat. Most of your image is middle grey except the white on TRS so your eye has no were to rest and gets pulled away to the right … this image would really pop if u darkened the shaded areas and lighten the light areas.. this would create contrast ,texture,line and form.
Peter
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