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    Hi, Stuart, I'd like to see the head a little sharper (or at least the eye) and the wing position isn't very flattering. Lovely reflections in the water.
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    My reaction is similar to Cheryl's. I like the colors and texture of the background, but I think I'd like the bird better if the oil paint (?) were reduced on it.

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    Your title is just right for this image. I chuckled when I saw it. :-) I wish there were more definition and contrast in the bird. I might also crop a bit from top and left. I do wish you would tell us what editing you did on the photos you present.

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    Wonderful bkgd of colors and textures. The wings of the bird are difficult to see as they blend too much into that bkgd. Good suggestions above. I really like the outstretched look of the bird with the long neck and the long extended legs.

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