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    Default A Song Sparrow for Thanksgiving

    taken at a local park a couple days ago...

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    7D, 500mm @f/6.3, 1/1250, ISO 800, HH. Cropped vertical and off the top a bit.

    Comments welcome

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    The vertical composition is the only way this would have rocked and you got it perfect there
    the pose is fine, IQ is fantastic
    The grass may be darkened a bit , not sure how it will look but its brighter than the bird so this is a thought that came to my mind
    you have executed this image fantastic

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    Way wicked pose. I'd lose the o-o-f stalk above and behind the bird. The others are optional. Bird is somewhat lacking feather detail. Try some NIK Color EFEX Pro Detail Extractor...
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    Thanks vishaljafhav and thanks Artie. I don't have NIK Color EFEX Pro, so I had to do it with PS... here is my re-post... is it an improvement in comp and feather detail? Thanks for your input!!!

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    I like the pose, complimentary BG, setting and composition. Well done Enrique!

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    Pose is killer. Repost looks good.
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    Hi Enrique. Repost is great! Love the pose.

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    The repost surely takes it up a few notches , the eye is directly taken to the bird
    Very nicely done

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    It is a wonderful image. The pose, perch BG, ... great.

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    thanks for your comments!

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