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    So before I coast on over to Etosha and the Kalahari with my family for 2 weeks of safari/familytime...here's a last post!

    I've been going through some unprocessed landscape images from 2011...and it's strange how time away from a specific shoot lets you realise what you did wrong, and also shows you some things that you did right which you felt were not really "hot & happening" at the time.


    So here's one I'd like some straight-shooting opinions on. At the time I wanted to shoot this pre-sunrise scene over the rolling Maluti mountains to show the vestiges of the more "foreboding" Drakensberg peaks at the back, and I quite like the diagonal lines leading you in. I'm starting to debate my own choice of foreground elements these days - it feels like I'm often choosing a "too strong" foreground anchor (if there is such a thing...what I mean is that sometimes the scene needs to get the attention, and placing a prominent rock or bush or tree in the immediate foreground then "robs" the real vista of some of the attention.


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    Hi Morkel, I love this one. The rocks among the grasses in the lower left provide a subtle anchor that works very effectively for this comp. And you have left just enough sky and were careful not to cut-off the main cloud too. Very nice work!

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    Hi Morkel - I agree with Andrew, this is very pleasant. The slopes lead you into the image and then the warm colors sort of envelop you. It works for me as is.

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    I like the colors and the blue adds to the distance of the mountains. You were thinking about anchors - but you have the three rocks on the left, bottom (including the two along the bottom left edge and that vertical at 8 o'clock. and the rock on the right side. These anchor well without detracting from the grand vista. I tried cropping them out or eliminating but they really do work well here, so I wouldn't. If you'd wanted to strengthen them you could have gotten just a bit lower and used a tilt-shift lens like a view camera.... but then you'd have to watch for dropout of focus in the middle distance canyon above and below the shifted plane of focus.

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    This works well for me too Morkel...! I especially like the colours of the patchy green amongst the brown and the pastel sky, I also like the various lines that intersect... I think the rock 'anchors' are spot on, subtle enough to do the job without stealing from the grand vista. Well done.

    DON

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    While I find it pleasant, I do think it lacks a dramatic focal point. My eye is lead to distant peaks which are too far off to really
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    Good scene overal I think. The muted colors with the grand view do it for me. I too question the strong foregrounds in my own at times. I think it works here without one.
    Chris


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