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    Default Mommy & baby Ele

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    I zoomed out to get these two in full frame to give an idea of the size. This was with the 7D & 70-200 f/4 IS, full frame image.
    Camera Canon EOS 7D
    Exposure (1/800)
    Aperture f/4.0
    Focal Length 127 mm
    ISO Speed 400
    Exposure Bias +1/3 EV

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    I assume this is the same pairing as previous Sanjeev? like the framing & perspective on this one much better.
    Would like to see a tad more detail/sharpness in their skin.
    TFS


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    Nice framing here and soft tones created by the overcast light.
    I wish there was a hint more space on the RHS (as viewed). I also wonder about the real DOF/sharpness? I presume at f4, mom would not be AS sharp as the little one (which may be why Marc referred to sharpness)?
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    Hi Sanjeev - I agree with Marc that the framing here is much better though I also agree with Morkel that a bit more room on the rhs would be better. Was your FP on mom or babe?

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    A lovely mother & baby image! I do like the feet showing some activity, especially mom's rear leg up. I will add my vote for more room behind the tail.

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    I also like this composition better than the earlier one and would echo the technical comments which have already been made. A nice mother and calf portrait, nonetheless.

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    Very nice mother and calf and I like the calf's positioning in front of the female. Perfect. I think it needs a bit more depth to it. Perhaps that could be achieved with a small amount of reduction in the whites, and a boost to the shadows and blacks. It just looks a little washed out to me. Additional sharpness would be a bonus.
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    This looks much better than the previous image Sanjeev. You got good suggestions already. Another vote for room on RHS and for more detail in the little one.

    Have a great day

    Ciao
    Anette

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    Hi Sanjeev,
    it is all been said, just would echo the comments above, because i cannot add anything important.

    TFS Andreas

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