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    Freddy Franzella
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    Hi Freddy,

    Very nice composition and head pose. I do find the lower perch a little "unrealistic". Did you do anything else to this image??

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maxis Gamez View Post
    Hi Freddy,

    Very nice composition and head pose. I do find the lower perch a little "unrealistic". Did you do anything else to this image??

    Thanks!
    Hi Maxis the perch was bright highlighted it took down the brightness some and also backed off on the contrast.

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    i liked your last quail better. i think the light here was a little too harsh. i could be wrong. not only does the perch look artificial, but the bird does too. i wish the bg was all green like the left of the bird. something just doesnt seem right to me and i cant put my finger on it.

    it just needed a little contrast and maybe darkening the corners a bit!!! that's all. i could post a repost if you like?!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by harold davis View Post
    i liked your last quail better. i think the light here was a little too harsh. i could be wrong. not only does the perch look artificial, but the bird does too. i wish the bg was all green like the left of the bird. something just doesnt seem right to me and i cant put my finger on it.

    it just needed a little contrast and maybe darkening the corners a bit!!! that's all. i could post a repost if you like?!!


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    i guess this is being really brave.

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    Quote Originally Posted by harold davis View Post
    i guess this is being really brave.

    I prefer to drop the contrast just a bit. I tried playing with the contrast, curves, and levels they were all about the same. in your repost to me the contrast looks just a tad to much! its like some people like glossy and some like luster.I cannot tell you how many times I look at a picture I have done and gone back and played with it.

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    i hear ya!!! it was fun playing around with it though!!

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    Hi Freddie, The bird is sharp and the EXP is good and the perch is OK+, but the light BKGR behind the bird and the darker BKGR in front draws the viewer's eye to the back of the frame.

    Lastly, I think that Maxis was asking if you did some cloning around the front of the head; it sure looks as if something bad happened to the BKGR around the front of the bir's head as the BKGR there is way funky...
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    I must agree with the opinions expressed above Freddie. I like the other quail much better.

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    Great details and pose. Maybe a bit less contrast since the light was so harsh. I might also try to desaturate the greens a few points.

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    Nice pose and BG. Works for me.

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