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I like the pose and the single out-of-place feather on the bird's head. I would like to see a bit more of the perch. And you have a green cast to the image that should be easily correctable.
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I love that feather too! Great calling or yawning? pose. I thought of suggesting a vertical because of the light spots in the bg but I like the comp as posted so my suggestion would be to darken the lighter area of the bg a little to make it less distracting.
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Doug Brown
I like the pose and the single out-of-place feather on the bird's head. I would like to see a bit more of the perch. And you have a green cast to the image that should be easily correctable.
Thank you Doug.
I really removed a diagonal branch in PP. Can you please tell me in what part of the image are you seeing the green cast?
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Hi Tiago, lovely pose and a neat perch - too bad there is not more of it showing. The image in general has a greenish/cyan cast and adding some reds would help negate that. I would also patch up the bit of processing artefacts from the branch you cloned out in lower left corner and right of the perch. Congrats on the new toy!!
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Hi Tiago. Very nice calling pose of this sweet species. I don't know the species but it does look a bit green overall but shows up mostly in the white feathers. As per Daniel's comment it can easily be corrected. I would like to see a bit more space at the bottom.
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Thank you all for your support! You're the best :)
I'm devolloping/starting my PP techniques and my eyes and technique aren't that trained yet.
I've redone it from scratch with a lower crop and with your C&C in mind.
Cheryl I just don't know how can I darken the brighter parts of the FG without making it look unnatural.
More C&C are very welcome :)
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Sorry I clipped the image that I first posted.
Here it is for comparison
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Thank you Doug, it does look more real
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Doug's version is perfect...