Hi JP, You did well with the harsh light. The image would have been improved had you not clipped the big wellow blossom. "If an object is worth including in the frame, you need to include the whole thing with at least a small border."
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Hi Bruce.
The harsh light is your main enemy here.
I did an inverse curve as suggested in the tutorial posted in the Edu Resources forum, then player with the plant, cropping the top and blurring it a bit as not to have it compete with the subject. Hope you like it!
If you have a RAW file, and you use ACR for conversion, you can add fill light and reduce contrast.
Beautiful subject, pose and setting, and you did a great job with the harsh light. I like the plant behind the bird...it adds nice color and habitat impact to the image, but agree with Artie that pointing the camera up just a tad to include all of the topmost blossom would have been an improvment.