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    what you think about ? is there too much sharp ?

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    Hi Giovani, the grass look OK to me, but the deer seems too much contrast and oversharpened. Is it a full frame? The deer is a bit too center for me, but I'm not sure how I would crop differently since there is an OOF deer in the back. Let hear what other folks say. Loi

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    There seems to be a blue cast to this. I like the idea so I would try to get a better colour balance on the image. I also like the symmetry of the deer in the background but he's heavily out of focus and too bright which draws the attention away from the main subject. Would experiment with cutting it out altogether or darkening to match the main subject perhaps.
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    Hi Giovanni

    You have posted some fantastic pictures, this one though donīt really work for me. I think the main subject is a bit to much covered in the grass, and the background is in a way messy and disturbing. I canīt really express in english my view on this. Maybe the problem with the bg can be resolved with different exposure/clarity/ (less) noise reduction. Agree with comments above.

    TFS / Gregor

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gregor Bergquist View Post
    Hi Giovanni

    You have posted some fantastic pictures, this one though donīt really work for me. I think the main subject is a bit to much covered in the grass, and the background is in a way messy and disturbing. I canīt really express in english my view on this. Maybe the problem with the bg can be resolved with different exposure/clarity/ (less) noise reduction. Agree with comments above.

    TFS / Gregor
    Hello Gregor
    I thanks you (ad other people) for your comment and tips.
    Off course a critic is what I like becouse sometime it is necessary a valutation from different people to have an idea about a shoot!
    I like this composition and also the male behind gived me a connection between the two animals (I ask your pardon for my bad english) ..but if I no tried to comunicate my interior sight..the shoot is no good !
    I upload also a different raw conversion ..but with the same composition

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    Hi Giovanni

    I like the repost much better. The BG is so much cleaner and pleasant to watch. It gives it a much more natural feeling. I also think that you get a better depth perspective and that the deer comes out more in the picture/grass. I actually didnīt think there was this much to improve in the picture. One thin to try could be to crop a bit of the LHS. This will place the subject a bit off center, and achieve a straight line between the corners and noses of the deers. Could maybe also take the orange down a notch. I do like the connection between the deers, and sympathies with you wanting to show this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gregor Bergquist View Post
    Hi Giovanni

    I like the repost much better. The BG is so much cleaner and pleasant to watch. It gives it a much more natural feeling. I also think that you get a better depth perspective and that the deer comes out more in the picture/grass. I actually didnīt think there was this much to improve in the picture. One thin to try could be to crop a bit of the LHS. This will place the subject a bit off center, and achieve a straight line between the corners and noses of the deers. Could maybe also take the orange down a notch. I do like the connection between the deers, and sympathies with you wanting to show this.

    /Gregor
    What you means with LHS ?

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    Hi Giovanni,

    nice image. You need to check your WB in this one!
    For me the RP does it

    Have a great day

    Ciao
    Anette

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    RP looks nice to me.
    Ed

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    Quote Originally Posted by Anette Mossbacher View Post
    Hi Giovanni,

    nice image. You need to check your WB in this one!
    For me the RP does it

    Have a great day

    Ciao
    Anette
    Thanks..but what you means "check your WB" ?

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    I meant WB > White Balance.

    Ciao
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    hi

    lhs = left hand side

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