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    BPN Viewer Haim Ziv's Avatar
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    Default Blackcap. (female)

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    Mark II 600mm with TC 1.4 1/640 f7.1 ISO200 WH FF morning time.
    Size: 4.7 inch up to 5.5 inch. Very unrest bird.
    Thank you for looking.
    Appreciate all critiques.

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    Judy Lynn Malloch
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    Haim this is a lovely capture with nice pose and excellent lighting and BG. IMO I find the leaf to the right is fighting for my attention and if you don't object to cloning I would remove it and give a little more canvas to the left side. Beautiul work and excellent eye contact. thanks for sharing..

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Haim,

    Good looking bird, nice set-up and great light. I would brighten the image up a bit and agree with Judy on the leave. More of a head-turn towards you would have been nice to get eye contact.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Judy Lynn Malloch View Post
    Haim this is a lovely capture with nice pose and excellent lighting and BG. IMO I find the leaf to the right is fighting for my attention and if you don't object to cloning I would remove it and give a little more canvas to the left side. Beautiul work and excellent eye contact. thanks for sharing..
    Thank you very much.
    From my point of view I thought the leaf add more
    completeness for the comp. (maybe I'm wrong).
    I have more pictures from this scene without the leaf and I will post it next time.
    Once more thank you.

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hi Haim,
    Possible fixes mentioned. If you re-post without the leaf.......add a link back to this one for comparison. Very nice and i could go either way with the leaf.

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